Monday, June 8, 2026

Writing Stronger Characters for Plot-driven Stories


Previously I did a post covering character-driven versus plot-driven stories, and I explained how it's really more of a spectrum than an either-or situation. Most successful stories are, to some degree, character-driven and plot-driven. Yet some stories lean heavily toward one direction. 

Critics of character-driven fiction feel that "nothing happens" and wonder, "Where's the plot?" It's like eating liver--it might be "good," supposedly, but what does it matter if you can't handle the first bite? Critics of plot-driven fiction feel that the stories lack meaning and substance, and they may wonder what the takeaway value is. To them, it's like eating candy--maybe it's dumb fun, but it lacks nutrients.

Personal preference isn't a sin. However, if you desire, you can minimize these criticisms by strengthening what each is apparently "lacking."

And as promised, today's article is all about writing stronger characters for plot-driven fiction.

(Next time I'll cover writing stronger plots for character-driven fiction.)

Monday, May 25, 2026

Character-driven vs. Plot-driven Stories (Examples, Definitions, and Writing Tips)


Stories are often broken down into two major categories: character-driven and plot-driven. 

In a character-driven story, the focus is on the character's internal journey. The stakes are personal, often tied to the character's identity—who he will or won't become. In a plot-driven story, the focus is on the external journey. The stakes are broad, tied to society or the world. Most stories have both, but emphasize one over the other.

Character-driven

Plot-driven

Internal Journey Emphasized

External Journey Emphasized

Personal Stakes

Broad Stakes

Character Arc is Central

Plot Goal Completion is Central

Substance & Meaning

Action & Intensity

Slower Paced

Faster Paced

Examples: Legally Blonde, Hamilton, a Man Called Otto, Finding Neverland, Michael

Examples: Indiana Jones, Interstellar, 007, The X-Files, Pirates of the Caribbean



Character-driven & Plot-driven: A Spectrum

While you can find stories that are strictly character-driven or strictly plot-driven, the truth is, most stories are, to a large extent, both. 

Usually the main difference is which plotline gets the most emphasis: the internal or the external.


Plotlines: Internal and External

Most successful stories will feature both internal and external plotlines that interweave. The character impacts the world. And the world impacts the character.

And pretty much any powerful plotline will have these four things: an objective, antagonist, conflict, and consequences.

These tend to be most obvious when looking at the external plotline.

In Moana, the protagonist aims to restore the heart of Te Fiti (objective), but Te Ka (and other antagonists) attack her (conflict). If she doesn't restore the heart, blight will overtake her home (consequences).

In the external plotline, the objective is a concrete, measurable goal. Moana aims to return the heart. We know that success is doing that.

The antagonists exist outside the character. Te Ka, Tamatoa, and the coconut people are forces that get in the way of her goal.

The conflicts are also external. Moana (and Maui) have to fight off and/or escape these entities.

The consequences are external as well. They are broad and far-reaching, meaning they affect a good-sized group of people and their "world"--in this case, everyone on the island and even beyond.

Plot driven story Moana External Plotline


But there is also an internal plotline with these four things.

In her heart, Moana wants to be true to herself (objective), but she is battling her own psyche (antagonist); she is facing doubt that she is the right person for this quest (conflict). If she doesn't overcome that doubt, she'll never become who she yearns to be (specifically a voyager) (consequences).

In the internal plotline, the objective is more abstract--such as "freedom," "love," or, like Moana, being "true to yourself." It's often the main motivator behind what the character does.

The antagonist exists inside the character. The antagonist is the character's self. It's Moana's own doubt that is getting in her way.

This means the conflicts are also internal. She must find it within herself to overcome this doubt.

The consequences are likewise internal. What Moana chooses to do in the face of that crippling doubt, will determine who she becomes--it will determine her character arc, her identity. Will she give up and never become who she wants to be? Or will she press on and realize her dreams?

Character Driven Story Moana Internal Plotline

The internal plotline can often be trickier to discern, because it is internal, and therefore more abstract. It usually exists within the psyche.

And while it's technically possible to write a successful story that has an external plotline but no internal plotline, it's extremely difficult to write one that has an internal plotline and no external plotline.

This is because what's happening internally will often be expressed externally.

It's Moana's desire to be true to herself--and help her people be true to themselves--that motivates her to return the heart. Sure, it's not the only motivator (the consequences of the blight are another big one), but it's a key motivator.

If the character truly wants something, she'll pursue a concrete goal to make it a reality. If she doesn't, she really didn't want it that badly.

Likewise, what happens externally will often affect the character internally--this creates the weave of the plotlines.

While technically that doubt exists in Moana's self, it's being brought on and exacerbated by other forces. Maui voices doubt that she was the right person for this journey, and the formidable (external) antagonists are testing Moana, bringing that doubt to the forefront, so she has to eventually confront it.

What she chooses to do in one plotline also affects the other. If she gives in to the doubt, then the heart won't be restored, and her island will be doomed. And if she successfully restores the heart, then she and her people can become who they truly are: voyagers.

Most stories have both an external and internal plotline--the difference is the emphasis. Are we largely focused on the external plot? Or the internal character?

Or does it fit somewhere in between, like Moana?


Plot-driven Stories (External Plotline Emphasized)

So, in a plot-driven story, the main difference is that the focus is on the external plotline, not the internal. 

In Indiana Jones, there is no internal plotline. It's almost all about the external--getting the Ark (objective), the Nazis (antagonist), the physical confrontations and chases (conflict), saving society from supernatural forces falling into the wrong hands (consequence). . . . Indy doesn't struggle much psychologically. This isn't to say he never does--he might have moments of internal conflict about what to do in a given (plot) situation (how will he overcome his fear of snakes?), but a moment of internal conflict here and there, isn't the same as having an internal plotline

A plotline is longer than a moment, longer than a scene or two. An internal plotline is a struggle with the self that has the potential to change who the character is (identity). It's the internal journey.

Indy has little to no internal journey.


That doesn't make Indiana Jones inferior. It just makes it different.

And if Indy did have an internal plotline, that means less time and attention spent on those epic fights and chases.

It's likewise possible to write a plot-driven story that still has an internal plotline--it's just de-emphasized, less important, and maybe even less developed.

Christopher Nolan's film Interstellar is plot-driven, but this doesn't mean it has no internal journey.

In the external plotline, Cooper aims to find a habitable planet (objective), but in outer space, Mother Nature is a beast (antagonist); this creates life-threatening encounters (conflict), that can potentially kill his team, and by extension, the whole human race (consequences).

These are very broad, external stakes, and they get most of our attention. But this doesn't mean there's no internal journey.

Cooper's abstract want is for him and his family to live--literally and figuratively (objective). This comes from his core and motivates essentially everything he does. He wants his family to live, so he goes on this space journey. But he also experiences doubt (like Moana) and regret on the journey. He also debates what's worth the costs (antagonist and conflicts). But in his efforts to complete the external goal, he changes internally. He learns that ultimately love is the most powerful force in the universe--more powerful than space, time, and gravity. It's so powerful, it helps him "defeat" Mother Nature, so he "wins" the main conflict, and gets his goal.

Earlier in the story, it's shown that Cooper is dismissive of love when in the clutches of nature. But by the end, he knows it is a force greater. His worldview of love has been altered.

This internal journey gets less attention, but that doesn't mean it's not there.

It may be less obvious, but it's still present.

And still impactful.



Character-driven Stories (Internal Plotline Emphasized)

In a character-driven story, the internal plotline gets the focus.

It's rare you'll find character-driven stories that have no clear external plotlines--it's extremely difficult to the point of being nigh impossible to pull off. This is because the abstract pieces almost always need to show up in concrete ways to be effective.

If we only dwell on what the character wants and thinks of doing, but she takes no action to do it, then the story isn't very interesting because it's not evolving or progressing.

It's not enough for the character just to want something--she needs to try to make it real, which usually means taking concrete action. 

So, if Moana only ever yearned to be true to herself, but took no concrete action to get that, it's not much of a story. The internal "world" must show up in the external "world."

Yet in a character-driven story, the focus will still be largely on the character's internal desires, experiences, and consequences ("consequences" meaning character growth/the character arc).

The film, A Man Called Otto is a character-driven story. In it, Otto wants to stop living (objective), so he takes concrete action by making suicide attempts . . . which keep getting disrupted by other people. The disruptions and people eventually lead him to confront his loneliness and unwillingness to accept help (antagonist and conflict). The stakes are not broad and far-reaching, but are deep and personal. Frankly, if he successfully takes his own life, not much of the "world" will be impacted. It's really mainly Otto's life and well-being that are at risk. If he doesn't learn to see beyond his own loneliness and learn to receive help, then he'll never move forward from his wife's death.


The plot isn't "thrilling" or action-packed. Yet it's deep and meaningful. It's not a story about the external; it's about the internal. It's about who Otto is and who he grows into.

Character-driven stories also tend to put more focus on (character) relationships and relationship plotlines, especially if the external plotline is modest. Because Otto doesn't have a major external plotline, the "relationship journeys" are highlighted instead. They are used to make the internal more "external"--more concrete. Otto feeling like he doesn't want help is one thing. Otto shutting the door on Marisol, who offers help, is much more effective. It's the internal world showing up in the external one.

With that all said, it's of course possible to write a character-driven story that has a solid external plotline. In fact, this is most common.

Hamilton is also a character-driven story, and it has plenty happening externally--like the whole founding of the United States of America. But the story is about Hamilton--who he was and who he became--and all the historical events are linked back to him.

It's about Hamilton's quest to build his legacy (objective), how he gets in his own way (antagonist) and causes problems (conflict), which eventually lead him to learn that, despite his best efforts, no one has full control over their legacies (consequences). This all changes who he is, by changing his beliefs.

The historical events are there, but they are framed around Hamilton's personal journey.



The Character-driven vs. Plot-driven Spectrum: A Matter of Emphasis

Interestingly, because most stories are somewhere between the two extremes, it's entirely possible to take a story idea and push it one way or another.

For example, if Lin-Manuel Miranda wanted to write a "plot-driven" play about the U.S., he could have totally done that. The Revolution and founding of America are ripe with thrilling turns, twists, and action. He could have written it with a broader scope and covered more of the founding fathers, and he could have leaned harder on the societal (external) conflicts.

But he didn't. 

He chose to write a character-driven story because, to him, Alexander Hamilton was the most interesting part. (Not to mention that an "external" view of America's beginnings has been done countless times before already.)

Likewise, Disney could technically take Moana and push it more one way or another. They could have cut down the internal journey and built up the external one. Or, they could have cut down the external journey and built up the internal one.

Recently I watched an adaptation of Trigun. It's the second adaptation of the source material. What's interesting is that in the first adaptation of it (from the 90s), the writers made the story character-driven. They focused more on the characters, relationships, and their internal journeys. But in the latest adaptation, the writers made the story plot-driven. They focused on the overarching external goals, the big action scenes, and the world-leveling stakes.

What was surprising to me is that even though they were so different from each other, they both still felt like the source material--which falls more in the middle. One production team tilted the story one way, and the other tilted it the opposite way.


However, this is easier done with some stories than others. If you made a character-driven Indiana Jones, it frankly wouldn't feel like Indiana Jones anymore. The epic chase scenes would be cut back, and we'd be focusing more on Indy's internal struggles. That's not what fans came for.

Likewise, turning A Man Called Otto into a plot-driven story would be a nightmare. It's so character-driven, that in order to place it at the other end, you'd have to essentially write a completely different story. It wouldn't be recognizable anymore.

So while most stories can be pushed one way or another, some can't, and to try would be a disservice.

Furthermore, some genres lean heavily toward one over the other. Women's fiction is going to be character-driven. Thrillers are going to be plot-driven. Literary fiction is going to be character-driven. Investigative mysteries are going to be plot-driven.

While we may have our personal preferences, neither is technically "better." They're just different.

Critics of plot-driven fiction feel that the stories lack substance and meaning, that they lack takeaway value. To them, it's like eating candy--dumb fun without nutrients.

Critics of character-driven fiction feel that the story lacks plot, that "nothing happens." To them, it's like eating liver--maybe it's "good," but who cares if you can't get beyond the first bite?

Personal preference isn't a sin. However, if you desire, you can minimize these criticisms by strengthening what each is apparently "lacking" . . . 

. . . and I'll have some upcoming posts on how to do that. (I was originally putting the info in here, but it got too long.)



Character-driven and Plot-driven: Misconceptions & Myths

A Misconception: Which "Drives" the Story and Makes it "Happen"?

So far in this article, I've been using "character-driven" and "plot-driven" to mean "character-focused" and "plot-focused," but there is another, less common way these terms get used that I want to address.

See, one of the problems with the writing community . . . is no one polices our writing terms. And so sometimes one term gets used to mean two or more different things. Or, we end up with multiple terms for the same concept.

While most people use the terms in the way I have, some use them to reference what makes the plot "happen."


They argue that in a "character-driven" story, the character "makes the plot happen." For example, at first glance, in Legally Blonde, the protagonist, Elle, is the full "driver" of the plot. She's the one who goes to Harvard, applies for the internship, and wins the case. She is "driving" the plot forward.

They likewise argue that in a "plot-driven" story, the external world "makes the plot happen." Meaning, the events are happening to the character. In Interstellar, the Earth is dying, forcing humanity (and by extension Cooper) to do something. Limited resources, time, and Mother Nature are pushing the characters forward through the story.

While I think there is something to this, this line of thinking is really misleading.

In a well-written story, both the character and the "world" are making the plot "happen." It's a weave. If only the character is making it happen, then the external world is too weak. If only the external world is making it happen, then the character is too weak.

This is true regardless of whether the story is character-focused or plot-focused.

In A Man Called Otto, the external world makes the plot "happen," just as Otto does. At the midpoint, when Otto goes to the train station to end his life, another man falls onto the train tracks instead (external event--"plot"). Otto responds by saving him (internal choice--"character"). Similarly, when Marisol finds a cat nearly frozen to death ("plot"), Otto reluctantly takes him in ("character").

In Indiana Jones, the protagonist makes the plot "happen" just as the external world does. Indy uses the medallion to successfully locate where the Ark is ("character"), but the Nazis discover him, seize it, and seal Indy in the Well ("plot"), yet Indy finds a way to escape and capture the truck hauling the Ark ("character"). He finds a way to transport the Ark to London, but the Nazis intercept them ("plot").

We see the same weave in Legally Blonde and Interstellar.


It doesn't matter if the character is proactively chasing the "carrot" (reward/positive consequences) more than avoiding the "stick" (punishment/negative consequences), like Elle, or avoiding the "stick" more than chasing the "carrot," like Cooper. It's still a weave.

It also doesn't matter if the character is a go-getter or reluctant. Indy is a go-getter in a plot-focused story. But Otto is reluctant in a character-focused story.

It also doesn't matter which force initiates the journey. Elle is in a character-focused story, but external forces initiate her journey: Warner breaks up with her. While The X-Files is a plot-focused story, Mulder initiates his own journey by jumping headlong into cases.

So suffice it to say, this outlook likely does more harm than good.


Myth: In a Plot-driven Story, You can Swap out the Characters

I've seen the argument that in a plot-driven story, you can swap out the characters without it changing the story.

Regardless of what type of story you are writing, if you can do this, it's a bad sign.

Most commonly, this is a sign that your characters don't exercise enough meaningful agency. Meaning, as I just mentioned in the previous section, they aren't impacting the plot and are therefore too weak.

And even if your characters are (unfortunately) bland at the surface level, different characters should be making different choices. Our choices show who we are. 

There is a big difference between someone who chooses to help someone only when he gets something out of it, someone choosing to help someone only when he has the time, and someone choosing to bend over backward to help someone at the drop of a hat. These are three very different people (even if they look "identical" on the surface).

If the first character is in a situation where there is nothing to be gained, his choice not to help should send the story in a different direction than if the third character were in that situation.

And if the third character harms himself bending over backward to help someone (he's probably a people-pleaser), then that should change the story's direction as well.

If you can just swap out a character for any other character, you have a problem.

There are maybe some rare exceptions to this, like when working with "everyman" characters, or, possibly, when working with stories that are offering more of a bird's-eye view of a societal conflict. But even then, probably not. Doing this sort of thing would be more of a rule break . . . which proves my point.


Myth: In a Character-driven Story, the Character Transforms

Quite a few people say that in a character-driven story, the character must transform or change, but this isn't true either. Not all protagonists have to go through a big change arc. Some stories are about the character remaining steadfast in who he was in the beginning, growing in resolve, and becoming an even better version of who he already is.

In the beginning of Legally Blonde, Elle already believes she can be herself and do serious things--that she can be taken seriously. But when Warner dumps her, doubt creeps in. The rest of the story tests Elle's resolve. In the end, she succeeds by holding fast to her initial beliefs and proving them true to others. You can be true to yourself (ultra-feminine) and still accomplish serious things. This doesn't mean she doesn't grow at all--she becomes a better version of who she was initially. But it's not a big transformation or change.

Likewise, in Finding Neverland, Barrie doesn't go through a big transformation either. Yet this is a very character-driven story. Instead of changing himself, Barrie helps those around him, specifically Peter, to change.

Technically, your protagonist does not need to undergo a big change arc to create a great character-driven story.


Ready for what's next? Here are some writing tips on creating stronger characters in plot-driven fiction

Coming Soon: Creating stronger plots in character-driven fiction.

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Character-driven vs. Plot-driven FAQs

Here are some quick FAQ responses on this topic.

Can a Story be Both Character-driven and Plot-driven?

Yes. In fact, most successful stories are both character-driven and plot-driven. The difference is which plotline (internal or external) gets the most emphasis. Stories exist on more of a spectrum, and while some will lean heavily one way or another, most will meet in the middle.

Which is Better: Character-driven or Plot-driven?

Neither is better. They are just different. Character-driven stories will highlight personal stakes and character arcs. They will focus on the character changing or remaining steadfast in who she is. These stories often feel more thematic and meaningful. Plot-driven stories will highlight external stakes and completing the plot goal. They focus more on how society or the world is impacted. These stories tend to be more action-oriented and intense.

Some audiences prefer character-driven stories and others prefer plot-driven.

Which Genres are Usually Character-driven?

Literary fiction, women's fiction, romance, coming-of-age, drama, comedy, and slice of life are usually character-driven.

But genre does not always dictate whether a story is character-driven or plot-driven.

Which Genres are Usually Plot-driven?

Thrillers, action, adventure, mystery, suspense, military fiction, and heist stories are usually plot-driven.

But genre does not always dictate whether a story is character-driven or plot-driven.

Is Fantasy Character-driven or Plot-driven?

Fantasy can be either character-driven, plot-driven, or both. The Lord of the Rings by J. R. R. Tolkien is more plot-driven, while Harry Potter by J.K. Rowling is more character-driven.

Is Science Fiction Character-driven or Plot-driven?

Science fiction can be either character-driven or plot-driven, or both. Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card is more character-driven, while Jurassic Park by Michael Crichton is more plot-driven.

What is a Character-driven Story?

Character-driven stories focus more on the character(s). They focus more on the character's internal journey, how he is impacted by the events of the plot, and how he arcs through the narrative (because of his choices). The stakes are deep and personal, and are often related to the character's identity--who he will or won't become.

Character-driven Story Examples

Legally Blonde, A Man Called Otto, Hamilton, Jane Eyre, The Secret Life of Walter Mitty, Michael, Twilight, Finding Neverland, Pride and Prejudice, Rocky

What is a Plot-driven Story?

Plot-driven stories focus more on the plot. They focus more on the external journey. Rather than emphasizing personal stakes, they emphasize broad, far-reaching stakes. They are less about how the protagonist is impacted by the events, and more about how other people or the world are impacted by them.

Plot-driven Story Examples

007, Indiana Jones, Stranger Things, Star Wars, The X-Files, Pirates of the Caribbean, Jurassic Park, The Hunger Games, Knives Out, Squid Game

How do I Know if a Story is Character-driven or Plot-driven?

A character-driven story puts more emphasis on the character's personal journey--the internal plotline. The stakes are deep and often relate to the character's identity, the character arc. What greatly matters is how the protagonist is impacted.

A plot-driven story puts more emphasis on the external journey or plotline--how the world or groups in it are impacted. The stakes are broad, affecting many people or a large place. What greatly matters is the state of the external world.

Most successful stories are both character-driven and plot-driven. But many stories lean one direction or another.

How Do I Write Strong Characters in Plot-driven Stories?

Just because a story is plot-driven doesn't mean the characters can be weak. Check out "Writing Stronger Characters for Plot-driven Stories" for 6 tips.


Monday, May 4, 2026

✨Write Your Best Book


Writing a novel is no picnic. (As you’ve likely noticed.) 

New writers often tell me it’s a lot harder than they imagined… 

And even experienced writers hit obstacles. 

When I’m doing an edit, I give as much feedback as I can, but it’s not realistic for me to send 700-800+ pages worth of storytelling teachings, principles, and guidance. It’s too much. 

I explain as precisely and thoroughly as I can in a shorter amount of space, linking to articles and resources. And while that goes well, it’s not always as comprehensive as I’d love it to be. This is because in a strong, resonating, professional-level story, its elements build off and influence each other.

In order to create the best climax, you need to thoroughly understand character arc and theme. And in order to write an impactful theme, you need to understand plotlines and character roles. Then in order to write a powerful protagonist, who exercises agency, you need to understand crises, internal turns vs. external turns, advanced scene structure, and more.

And even if you have all these pieces, it’s not enough. You need to know how to structure them properly—in a way that hits, hooks, and reels in your audiences so they keep turning pages.

That’s what my writing course, The Triarchy Method, gives you.

And it’s better than a 700-800+ page book—the personalized feedback is still there. I give assignments that target the principles we cover (which you’ll use your work-in-progress to fulfill), and I return them with feedback and suggestions.

You also get a scene workshopped in class, and you’ll be given a final guided outline to fill out. All the classes are recorded, so you can go back and rewatch them. You’ll also get their slides and can be part of a writing group or partnership (if you so desire).

The thing is, I only take 9 students, because it’s the only way I can give each student and story the attention it deserves. It’s the only way we can evolve your story into its best version.

A few writers have already signed up, so there are fewer than 9 spots available.

The course starts next month, and I wanted to let you know that early bird pricing ends May 19th. (2 weeks from now.)

Enroll to reserve your spot, or learn more, here: https://www.fawkesediting.com/triarchy-method-writing-course


TL;DR

When I’m doing an edit, I give as much feedback as I can, but it’s not realistic for me to send 700-800+ pages worth of storytelling principles. In a strong story, its elements build off and influence each other, and they’re properly structured to keep the audience engaged. That’s what my writing course teaches you.

It’s better than an 800-page book because it has personalized feedback, workshopping, recorded classes, writing partnerships/groups, and more.

The course starts next month. Early bird pricing ends May 19th (in 2 weeks).

There are < 9 spots available.

Learn more here.

Monday, April 27, 2026

Writing Slice of Life, with Kishotenketsu


When writing slice-of-life scenes, sequences, acts, or whole narrative arcs, it can be tricky to keep them interesting; kishotenketsu story structure can help writers do just that. 


What is Slice of Life?

Slice-of-life moments depict ordinary, everyday life. They can include routines, like walking a dog, making dinner, or even waking up and getting ready for school; or typical social interactions, like hanging out with a friend, asking a spouse about their day, or getting permission from a boss to leave work early. They tend to have low conflict and low stakes, and in fact, they may even have no conflict.

The longer the slice-of-life part is in a story, the trickier it can be to pull off. A bored audience is usually one that won't stick around, and slice-of-life can be rather mundane. 

In a strange way, this often makes slice of life significantly more difficult to write. In a high-stakes, conflict-filled scene, the writer has a lot to work with. If your character is running away from a serial killer, it's innately interesting, and the audience is much more likely to stick around. When a character is doing routine paperwork with little at risk, it can easily, and quickly, turn boring. (And frankly, many unpublished slice-of-life scenes don't contribute enough to the story.)

With that said, what often makes slice of life interesting and enjoyable are the characters and their relationships, and/or the atmosphere and setting. With the "right" characters, a simple trip to the grocery store can be a treat. And if the setting is something like Paris, then everyday experiences there can feel like pleasurable escapism. The target audience may want to linger in a bakery near the Eiffel Tower. 

Many fans of slice of life also cite nostalgia as a draw, and they appreciate reading or watching a story that is actually relaxing. While not a requirement, slice of life tends to be lighthearted. If an entire book or show is slice of life, then often it will be paired with another genre--most commonly comedy or romance. It's typically very difficult to get away with writing something that is pure slice of life (because of some reasons we'll cover below).

Yet, with the rise of slice-of-life vlogs in recent decades, as well as slice of life's close cousin, cozy fiction, it's obvious there is an appetite for "quieter," realistic content.

One of the best ways to handle that content, is to follow kishotenketsu story structure.

Monday, April 13, 2026

Turning Point vs. Plot Point vs. Plot Turn


Plot turns, turning points, and plot points work to turn the direction of the story, but few writers fully understand what they actually are.

And when I was learning the writing craft, I sometimes wondered what the difference was between turning points and plot points. And plot turns for that matter.

At the time, I couldn't find any clarity online. So . . . here is the post that past me needed. 😉

Monday, March 30, 2026

Positive Tension & Stakes: The Potential for Things to Go Right


Tension and stakes are two key components of storytelling, and they often go hand-in-hand: If you want to increase tension, you layer on stakes. And if you want to lessen tension, you remove stakes. 

Typically when we consider tension and stakes, we look at them through a "negative" lens. They are about what could go wrong and what could be lost.

Tension is regularly confused with conflict, but they are two different things. Simplistically speaking, tension is the potential for problems, and conflict is the problem actually happening. Tension comes from anticipation.

Stakes are often defined as what the character has to lose, what is at risk in the story. I prefer to define them as potential consequences. They are what could happen, if a condition is met. For example, if Fred gets fired, then he'll lose his house. Losing his house is a potential consequence. His house is what is at risk in the story (along with his job, obviously). So, it is what is at stake.

In order to increase tension, we layer on more stakes. If Fred gets fired, then he'll lose his house and his wife. And if he loses his house, then he'll have to move in with his twin brother, who is an abusive jerk. And if he loses his wife, then Fred won't get to see his kids that often. Now, when Fred meets with his boss for an evaluation, we feel more tension, because so much is hinging on him keeping his job.

Usually in the writing community, when people talk about tension and stakes, they're referring to things going wrong. Fear is what typically keeps readers turning pages.

But the reality is, tension and stakes can also come from the positive: the potential for things to go right. And hope can sometimes be just as powerful as fear in creating page-turners.

Monday, March 9, 2026

Kishotenketsu Story Structure Explained (with Examples, Visuals, Variations)



Kishōtenketsu is a 4-part narrative structure from East Asia, and over the years, it has slowly been making its way into Western writing communities. From Studio Ghibli's Spirited Away, to the award-winning horror film Parasite, to anime and manga like Demon Slayer topping the charts, and the climbing craze for k-dramas, many Westerners have fallen head over heels for the kishotenketsu (pronounced "kee-show-ten-ketsu") storytelling approach (whether they know it or not). Unfortunately, though, there have also been quite a few misunderstandings about what kishotenketsu actually is, and how it works, on its way to the West.

Last year, a student in my writing course asked me to comment on kishotenketsu. And while I will openly admit I'm not an expert on it, or East Asian culture, I'm not completely clueless either. Japan has long held a special place in my heart because my dad, brother, aunt, uncle, and cousins lived there. My best friend's dad did work there. And my other brother's close friend was half-Japanese--he'd sometimes share cool shows with us (fun fact: my first Studio Ghibli film was all in Japanese, no subtitles, thanks to this friend).

I wish I could say these people helped me write this article, but the truth is, they didn't; they haven't studied kishotenketsu or writing in depth . . . and with the research I've done, I know more than them on this topic now. (It probably also helps that I inhaled a lot of anime during my formative years 😉) With that said, I am open to hearing corrections from those who know more than me--I just ask they be given with kindness.

I am not East Asian, but what I am is a professional editor and writing instructor who has studied a lot about stories and their structures. I believe my thoughts on this topic are worth sharing. Also, I did look at sources that were actually East Asian, because I do prefer to learn straight from the originators. My references are listed below.

Let's get into it.

(*Notes: I sometimes use West and East in this article as generic terms; I'm aware they are imprecise, but this allows for simplicity. Based on the content of this article, I'm sure you'll get what I mean. Also, plurals are handled differently in English versus Japanese, so I've coined the word "tens" to reference multiple "ten" for clarity, for my audience--I'm aware this isn't how it's handled in Japanese.

Finally, because this ended up being a longer-than-normal post, I've included a table of contents 😊)

Monday, February 23, 2026

Does My Character Have to Arc?


Some writers wonder if their character has to have a character arc. 

Usually those who ask this, view character arcs as a protagonist changing, and from that perspective, the answer is no. Your character does not have to "arc" (read: change).

But perhaps the more accurate question is, "Does my character have to have an internal plotline?" That is what is really being asked here.

Because at the basic level, all characters arguably "arc," but not all characters have internal plotlines. If the protagonist has no internal plotline, then usually that means a different plotline needs to be emphasized in its place.

Let's dig into what a "character with no arc" actually means (at least imho).

Friday, February 6, 2026

Registration Now Open for the Triarchy Method



Hi friends! 

Registration for my live online writing course is now open. 

- Sign-ups are first come, first serve 

- I'm only taking 9 students for the course this year. 

- Classes start June 9th at 7 pm EDT (5 pm MDT) and end on August 27th (all classes are recorded, so if you miss it live, you can watch it later. You can also rewatch the course however many times you want to in coming years)




The Triarchy Method is a developmental writing course that is all about strengthening the "bones" of your story (character, plot, and theme)--and you may have heard me reference it in my posts . . . or seen me share some slides and diagrams from it. Like these . . . 

Monday, January 26, 2026

What Your Character Likely Fears Most


While I don't consider the protagonist's greatest fear to be positively vital to a good story, knowing it and working with it can certainly improve the story and give it more impact. Perhaps the reason I don't focus too much on fears, is because if you have the proper story pieces in place, your protagonist's greatest fear is likely already in place as well--you just may not realize it. But once you do, you can utilize it to better effect.

So let's dig into how to find your protagonist's (or any character's) greatest fear, according to story theory.

Monday, January 12, 2026

What is a Deus ex Machina? Why is it "Bad" Writing?

What is a Deus ex Machina? 

In writing, a deus ex machina happens when something (character, object, ability, event) suddenly resolves a seemingly unsolvable situation, usually at or near the climax. The "something" is unexpected or unlikely, coming out of nowhere.

The term deus ex machina is Latin and translates into "god from the machine." It references ancient Greek theater, where a god character would be lowered on a crane (machine), or raised through a trapdoor on a riser (machine), to resolve the story's problem. This pulls the story toward its conclusion.


Deus ex Machina Examples

Some examples of a deus ex machina include:

- A powerful, skilled minor character who abruptly shows up to save the protagonist by defeating the antagonist at the end.

- A protagonist suddenly finding a magical object that defeats the antagonist.

- An unexpected rainstorm that puts out a fire surrounding the heroes' homes.

- A character who abruptly reveals she's the sharpest shooter in the region, and she can make the unlikely, extremely difficult shot that will definitively thwart the antagonist.

- A pack of wolves charging into the clearing to take out the bad guy at just the right moment.

Monday, December 22, 2025

Writing Try/Fail Cycles: Strengths vs. Weaknesses


What is the Try/Fail Cycle? 

The try/fail cycle is a writing approach where a character attempts to achieve a goal multiple times and fails at least twice before succeeding.

For example, our child protagonist may have the goal to own a bike. She goes to a neighbor who has outgrown hers, and asks if she can have it (try), and the neighbor says no (fail). So, then she decides to do a bake sale on her sidewalk to earn money to buy a new one (try), but it rains, so no one shows up (fail). She learns about a contest that has a new bike as a prize, so she competes (try), and wins (success). She now has her own bike.

This is a very simple example, but the try/fail cycle is simple in and of itself (which is simultaneously a strength and a weakness).

The try/fail cycle approach was common in the 1950s, and taught by author, editor, and critic Algis Budrys. Unfortunately, though, no one seems to know who originated it, since it wasn't Budrys himself. I first learned about it from David Farland, who was mentored by Budrys, but I've never been able to track down the original source (though David talks about it in his book, Million Dollar Outlines). David himself mentored many writers who went on to become best-selling authors (like Brandon Sanderson and Dan Wells, to name two). And in more recent times, some of those writers (and others) have evolved the concept. For example, Mary Robinette Kowel pairs it with the "No, and" vs. "Yes, but" rule. And I've seen others relate it to Orson Scott Card's M.I.C.E. quotient

In its initial form, though, the try/fail cycle is that simple. The character tries and fails at least twice, before succeeding.

Monday, December 8, 2025

Using Character & Theme to Fix a Scene


Recently I rewatched the original Pirates of the Caribbean trilogy (if you haven't noticed from my latest posts), and it really holds up: complex and sophisticated plotting, iconic characters with sturdy arcs, and nuanced themes about honor and freedom.

This trilogy did so many things right. It's no surprise it was a huge hit. (Do they even make movies like this anymore?)

While I could go on long about everything that it does right, today I actually want to zoom in on what I consider its weakest element: Davy Jones's Locker.

This is one (1) scene in the whole trilogy, but it's always felt off and just . . . weird to me. To the extent that it sort of taints my memory of the last film (which, revisiting it again, is actually quite well written).